50 min
Student Lesson
Lesson 44: Flex Day: Skill-Based Huddles, Day 4
Content
Students will strengthen presentation skills by organizing key details, using visuals to clarify ideas, and adapting speech for an audience and task.
Language
Students will use transition words, location words, and precise academic language to explain their ideas during presentation practice.
Foundational Skills
Students will strengthen phrasing, pacing, and pronunciation to support clear oral delivery.
What does it take to learn something difficult?
How does art connect people to their history and community?
Knowledge-Building:
Students build on their Gallery Talk rehearsal work about apprenticeship, process, and craft.
Enduring Understanding:
Mentorship and practice turn skill into art.
Future Lessons:
Students will apply these presentation moves as they prepare for and participate in the final showcase.
Unit Performance Task:
Students will present a polished Gallery Talk that clearly explains a learning process connected to the unit texts.
| Lesson Flow | Purpose of Learning Experience |
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Launch5 Minutes | Students self-assess confidence on SL.6.4.a, SL.6.5, and SL.6.6 to help the teacher form huddles. |
Learning in Action40 Minutes | Teacher uses flexible grouping to provide targeted 10–15-minute huddles (SL.6.4.a, SL.6.5, SL.6.6) anchored in a text excerpt of the teacher's choice; other students engage in independent reading or knowledge-building tasks. |
Look Back5 Minutes | Students reflect on growth in confidence or new learning from independent work. |
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Material List
Unit 2, Lesson 44 Student Edition
Students’ Gallery Talk speaking notes
Students’ process diagrams
Pencil
A Single Shard by Linda Sue Park
Teacher-selected short text from the Unit that includes visuals
Routines
Quic Write
Say: Based on your self-assessment and your recent work, I'll be meeting with small groups while others work independently. Let's start by rating your confidence.
Instruct students to reflect on their ability to do each of the following using the Reflection routine.
Reflection (SL.6.4.a, SL.6.5, SL.6.6) |
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Reflect on your ability to do each of the following using the Reflection routine.
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Connection to Today's Learning
Say: Using your confidence ratings in addition to how you've demonstrated your understanding in recent work, you'll get individualized learning sessions so you get what you need today.
Collect a quick visual of ratings. Students may hold up fingers or record ratings on paper while you sort groups.
Explain the plan:
Three 10–15-minute teacher huddles:
Huddle 1: SL.6.4.a (Organizing Key Details Clearly)
Huddle 2: SL.6.5 (Using Visuals to Clarify)
Huddle 3: SL.6.6 (Adapting Speech for Audience and Task)
Students not in a huddle work independently through either independent reading or a knowledge-building task.
Sort students using:
1. their Reflection responses
2. your data from recent formative assessments (exit tickets, annotations, short responses)
Teacher Tip |
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Because Flex Days are meant to be responsive to your students' needs, you may find that you do not need to complete all three huddles suggested in this lesson, or you may find that there is a more appropriate target to focus on during this time. Feel free to focus this lesson on the skills or concepts your students need the most support with. |
Explain that you are first going to pull students for additional work on SL.6.4.a (Organizing Key Details Clearly). Pull students who rated 1–3 on SL.6.4.a and/or have shown difficulty with arranging ideas in a logical order, choosing the most relevant supporting details, or using appropriate transitions based on recent work. All other students begin independent work (see "Independent Choice Work" below).
Pull this group when students read their notes as a list instead of a clear explanation, skip important stages in the learning process, or include extra details that distract from the main point of the section.
Students not in responsive huddles choose one task and write a brief response.
Option 1: Independent Preparation
Read a short section of your Gallery Talk notes. How does that section explain one process or stage of learning clearly? Cite one example.
My notes explain the observation stage of learning clearly because I say, “First, Tree-ear watches Min shape and trim the clay before he tries anything himself.” That example tells the audience exactly what happens first, and includes details about what is happening.
Option 2: Knowledge-Building
How does your work today develop the idea that mentorship and practice turn skill into art? Cite one example.
My work develops the idea because my speech describes Tree-ear moving from watching to practicing to improving, and uses specific details and transitions. That helps show that skill grows through guidance and effort, not all at once.
Use any teacher-selected sample text for this huddle. Students should have the text in front of them.
An informative speaker should begin with a clear topic so the audience knows what the speaker is explaining.
Relevant facts, short definitions, and concrete details develop the topic better than listing every idea from the notes.
Transitions such as initially, next, for example, and as a result help listeners understand how ideas and steps connect.
Say: We are going to look at one short section of text and check whether the details are relevant and ideas are presented clearly. Then we will revise that part so a listener can follow the explanation from start to finish.
Have students read one short section of the text and mark the part they think the audience needs to understand first.
Ask: What idea does the audience need to hear first in this section?
The audience needs to hear first that Tree-ear begins by observing Min closely. That idea sets up the rest of the process because the practice and mistakes happen after that.
Have students look again at the same section and identify which fact, definition, or concrete detail best develops or explains the process.
Ask: Which detail is most relevant here, and why?
The most relevant detail is that Tree-ear watches Min's hands and tools carefully. That detail matters because it shows how he learns before he starts doing the work himself.
Have students reorder or revise the section so the explanation uses transitions to organize ideas clearly and show relationships among relevant details.
Ask: How would you revise this part so it starts clearly and develops the process with relevant details?
I would say, “First, Tree-ear studies Min's process. Next, he completes simple tasks and starts to understand the work. From that point forward, each mistake teaches him how to improve.” That version is easier to follow because the steps are in order.
Say: Now you will show that you can organize a short explanation for an audience. Write 2–4 sentences you could say aloud. Make sure you include a clear idea and at least one relevant detail, and use transitions to show the relationship between your ideas.
Say: Write 2–4 sentences that explain one stage of learning from your presentation. Present ideas and details in a clear order, using at least one transition.
Initially, Tree-ear learns by watching Min work with patience and precision. For example, he watches how Min's hands and tools work together. Subsequently, he begins to do small tasks himself and learns from correction. As a result, his skill grows over time.
Check for Understanding |
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Circulate and spot-check:
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Explain that you are going to pull students for additional work on SL.6.5 (Using Visuals to Clarify). Pull students who rated 1–3 on SL.6.5 and/or have shown difficulty with referring to a diagram clearly or using visuals to strengthen understanding based on recent work. All other students begin independent work (see "Independent Choice Work" below).
Pull this group when students hold up or display a visual without naming what the audience should notice, read from the visual without explaining it, or use a diagram that is present but not connected to the spoken explanation.
Students not in responsive huddles choose one task and write a brief response.
Option 1: Independent Preparation
Read your process diagram and notes together. Which part of your visual adds information that your words alone might not show as clearly? Cite one label or feature.
My arrows add information because they show the order of the steps quickly. The label “refine the shape” helps the audience see that Tree-ear improves the work little by little.
Option 2: Knowledge-Building
How does a visual help people understand a craft tradition or learning process? Cite one example from your work.
A visual helps people understand craft because it shows how one step leads to the next. In my diagram, the stages from observing to refining make the apprenticeship process easier to see.
Use any teacher-selected unit text that includes visuals for this huddle. Students should have the visual in front of them.
A visual should make an idea clearer, not just decorate the presentation.
The speaker needs to tell the audience where to look and what the visual shows.
Labels, arrows, and simple titles help a visual communicate quickly.
Say: We are going to practice how a speaker uses a visual on purpose. We will look at a visual, decide what the audience should notice, and then say that idea clearly out loud.
Have students examine the selected visual and identify the first part an audience would likely notice.
Ask: What should the audience notice first in this visual?
The audience should notice the arrows showing the order of the steps first. Those arrows help people see that the process moves forward in stages.
Have students identify one label, symbol, or design choice that adds important information.
Ask: Which feature of the visual makes the explanation clearer, and how?
The label “practice and correction” makes the explanation clearer because it shows that an apprentice does not learn only by watching. Apprentices also improve through feedback.
Have students practice one sentence that points the audience to the visual and explains why it matters.
Ask: What could you say so the audience knows exactly where to look and what to learn from the visual?
As you look at the center of my diagram, notice how the arrows connect observation to practice. That part shows that an apprentice’s growth happens in steps, not instantly.
Say: Now you will write a short, audience-ready line that uses a visual to strengthen your explanation. Make sure your sentence tells the audience where to look and why it matters.
Say: Write 1–2 sentences that introduce one part of your visual, and explain how it helps your audience understand your topic.
Please look at the bottom row of my process diagram. That section helps the audience understand how repeated practice leads to refinement over time.
Check for Understanding |
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Circulate and spot-check:
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Explain that you are going to pull students for additional work on SL.6.6 (Adapting Speech for Audience and Task). Pull students who rated 1–3 on SL.6.6 and/or have shown difficulty with pacing, volume, or audience-appropriate word choice based on recent work. All other students begin independent work (see "Independent Choice Work" below).
Pull this group when students read in a flat or rushed way, use casual phrases that do not fit the academic setting, or speak so softly or quickly that listeners cannot follow the explanation.
Students choose one task and write a brief response.
Option 1: Independent Preparation
Read a short part of your speaking notes aloud quietly to yourself. Where would you need to change either your wording or your delivery so the line fits a formal presentation instead of a casual conversation? Cite the line.
I would change the line “And then he got way better” because that sounds too casual for a presentation. I would revise it to “Subsequently, he refined his technique,” and I would slow down on “Subsequently” so the audience hears the shift.
Option 2: Knowledge-Building
Why does audience-friendly speaking matter when you are teaching others about a craft or process? Cite one example from your presentation.
Audience-friendly speaking matters because the listener needs to understand the steps, not just hear the words. In my presentation, the line about observation and correction makes more sense when I use precise language and say it slowly and clearly.
Use any short teacher-selected passage for this huddle. Students should have the text in front of them.
Adapting speech for audience and task means choosing a voice, pace, and wording that fit the situation and audience.
In a classroom presentation, a speaker needs to use precise vocabulary and complete sentences.
Listeners need clear pronunciation, steady pacing, and words that sound respectful and precise.
A speaker can mark pauses, emphasis, and repeated practice spots directly on notes.
Say: We are going to take one short section of text and make it sound more audience-ready. We will decide which words need to sound more precise, where to pause, and how to deliver the line so it matches the task of teaching an audience.
Have students read a short section of the text aloud softly and mark one place where a pause would help the audience.
Ask: Where should you pause in this section so listeners can follow the idea?
I should pause after the phrase “prior to shaping the clay” because that idea sets up what happens next. The pause helps the audience process the sequence.
Have students identify one word or phrase that sounds too casual, unclear, or not specific enough for a Gallery Talk.
Ask: Which part needs to sound more academic or precise for this audience?
The phrase “he got way better” sounds too casual. I should say “he refined his technique” because that matches the topic and sounds clearer for a presentation.
Have students revise and rehearse the line with a delivery note, such as slash marks for pauses or underlining for emphasis.
Ask: How would you revise and mark this line so it fits a classroom audience?
I would revise it to “Subsequently, Tree-ear refined his technique through steady practice.” Then I would underline “Subsequently” and “refined” and add a pause after the first word.
Say: Now you will show that you can adapt one line for an audience. Revise the sentence so it sounds clear, respectful, and ready to present aloud.
Have students revise a sentence from their own presentation or provide this sample sentence: “And then he did this cool thing with the clay and got way better at it.”
Say: Revise the sentence to match your audience and task.
Subsequently, he shaped the clay with greater skill and control. That revision sounds more precise and fits an academic audience.
Check for Understanding |
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Circulate and spot-check:
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Students complete a brief reflection based on what they did today (huddle reflection or independent work reflection). Invite 2–3 students to share.
Option A (students who attended one or more huddles):
Rerate your confidence for SL.6.4.a, SL.6.5, and SL.6.6. What specifically improved?
Before, I was a 2 on SL.6.5, but now I am a 4 because I can tell the audience exactly where to look on my diagram and explain why that part matters. I also moved from a 3 to a 4 on SL.6.6 because I revised one line to sound more formal and easier to follow.
Option B (students who did independent reading/knowledge-building):
What are you learning about on the unit topic from today's reading/work? Cite one detail.
I am learning that apprenticeship is a step-by-step process, not a sudden change. One detail from my work is that Tree-ear first observes, then practices, and only later begins to refine his technique.
Students read their independent reading book for 20 minutes and complete a reading log entry.
A Single Shard
Linda Sue Park
