50 min
Student Lesson
Lesson 8: Seen and Unseen, Part 3
Content
Students will determine a central idea and analyze how Partridge’s written account and Lange’s photographs represent Japanese American forced removal and incarceration.
Language
Students will interpret written and visual representations by citing visible details, naming what is outside the frame, and using descriptive academic verbs such as conveys, suggests, and emphasizes.
Foundational Skills
Students will read a short excerpt fluently by using punctuation to guide phrasing and pace.
How do historical records (texts, images, and testimony) shape what is remembered about the past?
Knowledge-Building:
In the previous lesson, students examined how public language and media shaped support for forced removal. Today, they compare Partridge’s writing and Lange’s photographs across the same historical moment.
Enduring Understanding:
Photographs provide visible evidence of historical events, but they also leave things outside the frame. Readers must notice both what is shown and what stays hidden.
Future Lessons:
In Lessons 9 and 10, students will continue studying Lange’s photographs and use those sources to build a written analysis.
Unit Performance Task:
Today’s work prepares students to compare sources and explain how different records shape public memory in the Unit Performance Task.
| Lesson Flow | Purpose of Learning Experience |
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Launch5 Minutes | Students will activate prior knowledge of the words humane and inhumane and connect those ideas to the unit’s study of forced removal and incarceration. |
Literacy Lab10 Minutes | Students will practice fluency with a key excerpt from p. 19 and connect punctuation, phrasing, and tone to Lange’s perspective. |
Learning in Action30 Minutes | Part A: Questions for Reading Photos (RI.7.6, RI.7.7) Students will learn and apply a five-question framework for analyzing photographs across pp. 18–33. Part B: Visible and Unseen (RI.7.2, RI.7.7) Students will compare written and visual representations in a T-chart and identify a central idea across the section. |
Material List
Student copies of Seen and Unseen by Elizabeth Partridge and Lauren Tamaki, pp. 16–21, 22–33
Unit 2 Lesson 8 Student Edition
Key Terms and Topics graphic organizer (from Lesson 1)
T-Chart graphic organizer
Routines
Think-Pair-Share
Fluency Practice
Turn and Talk
Close Read & Annotation
If students completed notes from the previous lesson, have them take out those notes before the opening discussion. Remind students that in the previous lesson, they studied how public messages shaped support for forced removal. Tell them that today, they will compare what the written text says with what the photographs show.
Use this routine to activate students’ thinking before they move into visual analysis. Students should briefly jot their thinking before talking with a partner.
Say these Directions: In the previous lesson, we looked at how public messages helped justify forced removal. Today, we are comparing Partridge’s words and Lange’s photographs to notice what the public could see and what stayed hidden. That matters because your performance task asks you to explain how different sources shape what people remember. Add the words humane and inhumane to your Key Terms and Topics graphic organizer, then think quietly for a few seconds before you talk with your partner.
Ask: What makes a policy humane or inhumane?
A humane policy protects people’s safety and dignity. An inhumane policy causes fear, separates families, or treats people as if they do not matter. Based on what we have read so far, forced removal was inhumane because Japanese Americans were punished even though they were not charged with crimes.
Ask: Is it possible for a government to describe a policy as humane even when the people living through it experience it as inhumane? Explain your thinking.
Yes. A government can use words like orderly or safe to make a policy sound humane, but the people affected may experience fear, loss, and injustice. That difference matters because it shows how perspective shapes the story that gets told.
Say these Directions: Partner A, share first for 30 seconds. Partner B, listen for one idea you want to build on. Then switch.
Connection to Today’s Learning
Say: Today, we will test those ideas against photographs and written text so we can see how a source can reveal truth while still leaving important details outside the frame.
Teacher Tip |
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You may wish to model pronunciation of proper nouns students will encounter in this lesson: Dorothea Lange, do-ro-THEE-uh LANG; Tanforan, TAN-for-AN; Manzanar, MAN-zuh-NAR. |
Use this routine to show students that pacing and punctuation support meaning, not just accuracy. Keep the focus on how the excerpt reveals Lange’s response to the government’s plan.
Say these Directions: Turn to p. 19 in Seen and Unseen. Follow along with the excerpt beginning with “Dorothea was horrified . . .” and ending with “That was illegal in the United States.” We are going to read it in a way that helps us hear Lange’s reaction clearly.
Say: First, listen as I read the excerpt aloud once. Next, we will echo-read sentence by sentence. Last, you will read it with a partner and coach each other to pause at the end of each sentence and phrase the long sentence clearly. Partner A reads first, then Partner B.
“Dorothea was horrified by the government’s plan. The prisoners would be held without charges filed against them and without the right to a trial. That was illegal in the United States.”
Say: When I read this excerpt, I do not rush through it because the punctuation shows me where the author wants me to pause and let an idea land. I notice the first short sentence ends with “plan,” and that quick stop makes Lange’s reaction feel immediate and strong. Then the second sentence is longer, so I slow down and group the ideas: “without charges filed against them and without the right to a trial.” Those phrases stack up the injustice piece by piece. When I get to the final sentence, “That was illegal in the United States,” I lower my voice and make a full stop because it sounds like a judgment. Reading the sentence that way helps me hear Partridge’s point that Lange understood this policy as wrong, not normal. Fluency matters here because pacing helps the meaning come through.
Ask: What did you hear in the pacing of the excerpt that helped show Lange’s perspective?
The pauses made each injustice stand out. When the reader slowed down on “without charges” and “without the right to a trial,” it emphasized how serious the government’s actions were. The final short sentence made Lange’s reaction sound clear and firm.
Teacher Tip |
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Authors Elizabeth Partridge and Lauren Tamaki refer to Dorothea Lange, Toyo Miyatake, and Ansel Adams by their first names throughout Seen and Unseen. However, other sources and lesson content use their last names. Students will therefore see a mix of these conventions through the unit, depending on the source. You may wish to have students write the full names in their Key Terms and Topics graphic organizers or in another easily accessible spot for reference. |
Check for Understanding (RI.7.6) | |
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Read the last sentence of the excerpt aloud to a partner, then write one phrase explaining what that sentence reveals about Lange’s perspective. | |
Modeling: | |
If needed, coach students to reread the sentence slowly and finish this frame: “This sentence reveals that Lange believed ___.” |
Connection to Today’s Learning
Say: Now that we have heard Partridge’s description of Lange’s response, we are ready to study how Lange’s photographs show some parts of the story while other parts remain unseen.
This is the first lesson in the unit that explicitly teaches students how to analyze a photograph. Keep the modeling brief and concrete, then have students use the same questions as they read and view pp. 18–33.
Say these Directions: Today, I am going to share a set of starting questions for analyzing photographs. These questions are lenses you can return to all unit long whenever we work with images. Copy the framework into your Notes section so you can use it as you read and flip through pp. 18–33.
Questions for Analyzing a Photograph:
Situation: Is this photograph candid or staged? How do you know?
Spacing: Are the subjects close or far away? What is in the middle, and what is cut off?
Position: Where would the photographer be standing to take this photograph?
People: If there are people in the photograph, where are they looking? What do their expressions and postures tell you?
Beyond the Edges: What clues do you see about what is outside the photograph?
Say: I am going to try out a few of these questions with the photograph on p. 18, Impounded. First, I ask about position: Lange seems to be standing a little to the side, so I can see both the people and the entrance with guards. Next, I ask about people: they are not smiling or looking at the camera; most of the people are looking forward beyond the gate. Finally, I ask about beyond the edges: I can see a gate and a guard, but I cannot see exactly where the line leads or how many people are in it, and that missing information matters. The photograph gives evidence, but the frame has limits. When I combine what I see with Partridge’s words, I understand the moment more fully.
Students should read and view pp. 18–33 with the framework beside them. Ask them to apply one or two questions at a time rather than all five to every image.
Say these Directions: Read and view pp. 18–33. As you read, use one or two framework questions to annotate what a photograph shows and what stays outside the frame. Then discuss one example with your partner.
Say: Start with just two questions: “people” and “beyond the edges.”
Ask: Look at the photographs on pp. 26–28. In several images, Lange shoots from a low angle, looking up at the people. Why might Lange have chosen that angle rather than shooting from above or at eye level? What does a low angle communicate about the people being photographed?
A low angle can make people look more dignified and strong. Lange may have chosen that angle so viewers would see the families as full human beings, not as a crowd being processed. That camera position suggests respect.
Ask: On p. 33, Lange photographs people arriving at the Tanforan Assembly Center, a former horse-racing track, which the text explains was used as a prison site. The text tells us families were assigned to horse stalls and given cloth sacks to fill with straw for mattresses (pp. 32–33). Look at Lange’s arrival photograph. What is not in the photograph that the text tells us was there? Why might Lange have been unable—or chosen not—to photograph the horse stalls directly?
The photograph shows people arriving with luggage and looking uncertain. But it does not show the horse stalls, the straw mattresses, or the dirty living conditions the text describes. It also cannot show the smell of horses or how the straw felt. Lange may not have been allowed to photograph inside the stalls, or she may have wanted to focus on the moment people entered the prison and realized what was happening.
Say these Directions: Use the framework questions as your starting point, and be ready to cite one detail from a photograph and one detail from the written text.
Check for Understanding (RI.7.6, RI.7.7) | |
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Complete this sentence in your Notes section: The photograph shows ___, but the written text adds ___, which changes my understanding because ___. | |
Modeling: | |
If students only summarize the image, prompt them to add one detail from Partridge’s text that is not visible in the photograph. |
Connection to Today’s Learning
Say: Next, you will organize what is visible and unseen across multiple photographs so you can determine a central idea about how incarceration was presented and experienced.
Teacher Tip |
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Be aware that the newspaper pages shown on p. 15 of Seen and Unseen include an anti-Japanese slur. This term was a slur when it was published, not a word that “became” offensive over time. It was used deliberately to dehumanize Japanese and Japanese American people and to make it easier for the public to accept their forced removal and incarceration. If students notice the term, affirm that it is harmful language. You might say: “That word was used as a weapon—to reduce an entire group of people to a stereotype and to justify treating them as enemies. It was not acceptable then, even though it was widely used. The fact that newspapers printed it tells us something important about how language was used to build public support for incarceration.” Note that the newspaper snippets use the term in two different headlines: one about Japanese American civilians and one about soldiers of Imperial Japan. This conflation—treating American citizens as identical to a foreign military—is itself part of the injustice the unit examines. |
Students will use the T-chart to compare written and visual representations of the same historical subject. Keep them anchored in one or two photographs rather than trying to capture every image from the section.
Say these Directions: Revisit the photograph on p. 18 and one additional photograph from pp. 24–33. Use a T-chart with columns labeled Visible and Unseen. In the Visible column, record what the photograph clearly shows. In the Unseen column, record what Partridge’s text, captions, or surrounding illustrations tell you that the photograph does not show directly.
Say: Use your T-chart to determine a central idea about how incarceration was presented and experienced. Then explain how both the visible details and what is left out support that idea.
Completed Sample T-Chart:
Visible | Unseen |
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people standing in line near a gate | where the line leads and what will happen after the gate |
number tags on coats | how the tags reduce people to a system and strip away individuality |
luggage and serious expressions | the horse stalls, straw mattresses, smells, and daily hardship described in the text |
Say: I am going to model how this chart helps me move from noticing to interpretation. In the Visible column, I can record a guard, a gate, and people waiting in line. In the Unseen column, I add that Partridge explains more about confinement, rules, and living conditions than the photograph can hold. When I place those ideas side by side, I notice a central idea: The public could see order on the surface, but much of the injustice stayed hidden. The photograph is real evidence, but it is still only part of the story. Comparing written and visual representations helps me see how meaning grows across sources. That is the work of RI.7.7—we do not just read the picture alone; we compare how different forms of media represent the same history.
Ask: Partridge writes that Lange “could have refused” the assignment but “was eager to expose the injustice” (p. 25). Look at one of Lange’s photographs in this section. What does she choose to focus on, and what do you think she wanted you to notice?
On p. 24, Lange photographs a family with number tags on their coats. She shows their faces and individuality, but she also makes the tags visible so we notice how dehumanizing the process was. She wanted viewers to see real people, not just an official procedure.
Pulse Check (RI.7.2, RI.7.7) |
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Which statement best explains how Partridge’s writing and Lange’s photographs work together on pp. 18–33?
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Connection to Today’s Learning
Say: You have compared what a photograph shows with what the written text adds. Now, you will use that thinking in one short written response about whose stories are visible and whose stories are still missing.
Use the first prompt below as the collected formative assessment. If time remains, students may begin the second witness-response prompt in class; otherwise, they can continue it in their Homework Journal.
The single most important look-for is whether the student names one story shown and one story missing and supports that thinking with a concrete detail from the lesson.
Say these Directions: Write two or three sentences responding to the first prompt with evidence from both the text and the photographs. If you finish, begin the second prompt by sitting quietly with one image for 30 seconds before you write.
Ask: In Lange’s photographs, whose story is being told? Whose story is missing? Use at least two specific details from today’s text and images.
Lange’s photographs tell the story of Japanese American families being forcibly removed and processed into prison sites. We can see luggage, number tags, and serious faces, but the photographs do not fully show the horse stalls, the straw mattresses, or every family’s private fear and anger. That missing part becomes clearer when Partridge describes the conditions at Tanforan in words.
Ask: Choose one photograph from today’s lesson. Sit with it for 30 seconds without analyzing it. Then write two or three sentences: What does this image ask you to think or feel? What does it ask you to remember or carry forward?
The photograph of the family with luggage tags asks me to remember that this happened to real children and parents. It asks me to treat this not as just one more historical image but as evidence of a real injustice people lived through.
Say: Today, you compared written and visual evidence to notice both what is shown and what is hidden. That same move will help you in the performance task because you will need to explain how sources shape memory of this history. When you choose evidence later in the unit, think about what each source reveals and what it leaves out.
Ask: Which one of our photograph analysis questions helped you most today, and why?
The question about what is beyond the edges helped me most because it reminded me not to stop at what I could see. It pushed me to use Partridge’s writing to think about the conditions the photograph could not show.
Connection to Today’s Learning
Say: In the next lesson, we will keep using these same lenses as we read more about Lange’s work and consider how limits on photography shaped what the public could understand.
Instruct students to take notes in their Journal on the following prompt:
Read pp. 22–49 of Seen and Unseen. In your Journal, respond to the following questions in complete sentences.
What were conditions like at Tanforan for the people imprisoned there? What are a few details that stand out about their daily experience?
Conditions at Tanforan were harsh and dehumanizing. People were housed in former horse stalls, had to fill sacks with straw for mattresses, and tried to live daily life in a place that was dirty and crowded.
Choose one photograph from these pages. What does it show about the lives of Japanese Americans at Tanforan? What aspects of their experience does it leave out?
One photograph shows people trying to stay orderly and calm, which reveals their dignity and resilience. But it leaves out the smells, cramped spaces, and private emotions that the written text explains.
The government placed rules on what photographers could and could not capture. How might those rules have shaped what the public understood, or failed to understand, about the incarceration?
Those rules may have made the incarceration look more orderly and controlled than it really was. If the public could not see the harshest conditions, many people would miss the full injustice.
Sadae Takizawa said, “Everybody felt lonely and anxious about the future. Deep down we felt anger. It was a melancholy, complex feeling” (p. 35). What does it mean to feel anger and melancholy at the same time? What might cause both feelings in someone who has been forced from their home and imprisoned without charges?
Feeling anger and melancholy at the same time means a person feels both upset about the injustice and deep sadness about what has been lost. Someone who was forced from home and imprisoned without charges could feel angry because it was unfair and melancholy because normal life was taken away.
Seen and Unseen
Elizabeth Partridge & Lauren Tamaki
