50 min
Student Lesson
Lesson 31: Seen and Unseen, Part 15
Content
Students use the tools developed in past lessons—analysis of craft, perspective, and structure/sequence—to compare two sequences from Seen and Unseen that contain survivor testimony.
Language
Students synthesize patterns across survivor testimonies by using abstract nouns (pattern, theme), comparative verbs (reinforces, complicates, contrasts), and cohesive transitions using evidence.
Foundational Skills
Students distinguish examples of discrimination from non-examples in order to build a more precise understanding of Japanese Americans’ experiences before, during, and immediately following World War II.
How can readers evaluate words and images for accuracy, perspective, and ethical use?
Knowledge-Building:
Students examine the various primary sources in Seen and Unseen for further details about survivors’ experiences.
Enduring Understanding:
Even within one text, different pieces of evidence get framed and presented differently.
Future Lessons:
In future lessons, students will select and analyze an external source that corroborates or contextualizes survivor narratives from Seen and Unseen. They will also craft explanatory paragraphs that synthesize information and insights from two survivor sequences.
Unit Performance Task:
Students will apply the full analytical toolkit they have been developing to multiple sources in the Performance Task.
| Lesson Flow | Purpose of Learning Experience |
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Launch5 Minutes | Students will turn and talk to discuss the benefits of learning about an event from multiple viewpoints. |
Literacy Lab10 Minutes | Students will explore the meaning of the word discrimination by distinguishing examples and non-examples. |
Learning in Action30 Minutes | Part A: Model Sequence Comparison (RI.7.6, RI.7.7, RI.7.9) Students will observe the process of reading two survivor sequences from Seen and Unseen side-by-side and comparing them in terms of tone, detail, perspective, and structure. The teacher will model the process using Think-Aloud prompts. Part B: Compare Sequences (RI.7.6, RI.7.7, RI.7.9) Students will work in small groups to complete an annotation following the principles in Part A. They will then share their observations in a whole-class discussion. |
Material List
Seen and Unseen by Elizabeth Partridge and Lauren Tamaki
Unit 2 Lesson 31 Student Edition
Comparing Multiple Sources Graphic Organizer
Routines
Turn and Talk
Example/Non-Example
Check for Understanding
Display the Essential Question: How can readers evaluate words and images for accuracy, perspective, and ethical use? Students will use the Turn-and-Talk routine to discuss the following prompt. Invite volunteers to share their observations with the whole class as time permits.
Say these Directions: Take a moment to think about the following prompt, then use the Turn and Talk routine to discuss your responses with a partner. You should consider emotional impact, perspective and bias, and differences in what is emphasized or omitted, in your discussion.
Ask: When you read multiple accounts of the same event, how do your impressions change? What patterns or differences do you notice?
Reading multiple accounts of the same event can show me that no two people experience events in exactly the same way. For example, when we read the accounts of forced removal, we get one piece of testimony from the point of view of a child and one from an adult’s perspective. Amy Iwasaki, who was six at the time, thought that Japanese Americans were being sent away as punishment for something they had done (p. 29), while the unnamed young man on p. 25 emphasized the indignity of being labeled with numbers.
Connection to Today’s Learning
Say: Today we will compare two or three survivor sequences from Seen and Unseen to investigate patterns. Keep in mind the points you made during the Turn-and-Talk discussion about tone, perspective, and emphasis of different sources.
Say these Directions: Remember that you have previously encountered the word discrimination. Work with a partner to determine whether the following scenarios are examples or non-examples of the target word.
Target word: discrimination
Introduce the Activity: Present each scenario orally and/or project on a board.
Ask: What does the word discrimination mean?
Discuss Scenarios: Ask students to discuss with a partner to explain why each scenario is an example or a non-example of discrimination.
Ask: Is this an example or non-example of discrimination? Why?
Discrimination | |
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Examples: People born in Japan could not buy land in California until after World War II, though many European immigrants were eligible to do so. Japan, Germany, and Italy were at war with the United States. Most Japanese Americans were incarcerated, while far fewer than one percent of German and Italian Americans were detained. Toyo Miyatake was not allowed to directly operate the camera in his own studio. | Non-examples: People who buy land in California must follow rules to protect wildlife habitats. Many state and federal crimes carry a prison sentence. A dangerous area of a factory is restricted to personnel with special training. |
Share Student Thinking: Invite groups to share their examples and non-examples. As students share their thinking, prompt students to share their rationale and explain their connections. For example:
Ask: Why is this first scenario, “people could not buy land in California…” an example of discrimination but this second scenario, “people who buy land in California must follow rules…” is not?
The first is discrimination because it affects people based on their country of origin. The second is not because it is a rule that everybody has to follow, regardless of where they are from.
Ask: What makes discrimination different from the rules and restrictions described in the non-examples?
Discrimination involves treating people unfairly based on their membership in a group, such as their race or gender. In the crime non-example, anyone who commits the crime is liable to go to prison; the law presumably applies to everyone. In the factory non-example, it is not unfair to require special training before people are exposed to workplace hazards. However, if the training were only available to people of a certain race or gender, then it would likely be an example of discrimination.
Connection to Today’s Learning
Say: As we continue to explore the testimony of Japanese American incarceration survivors, it is important to remember the attitudes and behaviors that allowed for such an injustice to take place. We should be alert to how Japanese-Americans experienced discrimination not only during, but before and after their imprisonment.
Select two survivor sequences (three to four pages each) from Seen and Unseen to briefly compare using the Think-Aloud Modeling routine. Share your thinking with students in response to the prompts.
Say these Directions: Follow along as I model how to compare a sequence, and record my findings in a Comparing Multiple Sources Graphic Organizer.
Ask: How do the authors place testimony from survivors relative to photos?
Say: I see that the quote from Taira Fukushima [p. 97] is placed at the bottom right of a spread that contains several smiling portraits of prisoners at Manzanar.)
Ask: How do shifts in pacing, sentence length, or visual framing affect your understanding?
Say: Because this quote appears after these portraits, it seems like it is meant to summarize what is happening in the portraits—that they show something that is “not necessarily true” or at least doesn’t tell the full story about life in the prison camp.)
Ask: What is left unsaid or unseen between sequences?
Say: From this sequence alone, we would be left to wonder what is “true” about life at Manzanar that did not make it into the photos. If the smiling portraits leave out important truths, where are those truths to be found in the images or text?)
Ask: How do the sequences reinforce or contrast with one another?
Say: Let me compare the sequence that quotes Fukushima with the earlier pages [pp. 52–55] surrounding Toyo Miyatake’s wish to “record everything.” In these earlier pages, I see why so much about Manzanar could not make it into photographs. He was working in secret, and the process he had to follow was extremely complex according to the diagrams. Meanwhile, the other two photographers were surveilled by guards and had to limit what they photographed.
Teacher Tip |
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As you select your page sequence for model annotation, consider opportunities to show contrasting perspectives from survivors in different stages of the incarceration program, at different stages of life, or with different backgrounds. For example:
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Reflection (RI.7.9) |
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Reflect on your ability to compare different sources within Seen and Unseen using the Reflection routine. Then write a sentence or two identifying specific challenges you face, or expect to face, in comparing survivor narratives. |
Say these Directions: Now you will work in small groups to annotate two assigned survivor sequences using the Comparing Multiple Sources graphic organizer. Your annotations should consider:
Differences in emotional tone.
Variations in perspective: who is speaking, who is visible.
Structural choices: order, placement, interactions of text and visuals.
Any gaps or omissions they notice.
Connections to the Essential Question.
Once students have completed their written annotations, have pairs/groups discuss the following questions:
Ask: Which sequence felt more personal, more public, or more distant?
Archie Miyatake’s bitterness at the loyalty questionnaire (p. 67) felt very personal to me. I would be extremely resentful if someone locked my family up and then asked for my help—especially if they tried to intimidate me into helping. The sequence that included Sadae Takizawa’s quote about melancholy (p. 35) felt more distant to me because it seemed to apply to everyone at the camp.
Ask: How does reading multiple stories together change your understanding of daily life in the camps?
Reading Takizawa’s and Miyatake’s stories together shows me that people had every reason to feel anxious during their time in the camps. Even when they were already confined and under armed guard, they were asked questions to try to winnow out “disloyal” prisoners.
Ask: What responsibilities do we have when interpreting multiple accounts?
One major responsibility is to remember that different people had different experiences, even under a system that tried to treat them as “all the same.” For example, Archie Miyatake was a “no-yes,” someone who swore allegiance to the U.S. but didn’t agree to serve in the armed forces. His experience was certainly different from the “no-nos” who were removed to Tule Lake or from those “yes-yes” respondents who ended up actually serving in the Army during the war.
Reconvene the class and have students share patterns or contrasts noticed across sequences, with emphasis on:
Emotional impact
Visible and missing perspectives
Structural decisions that guide understanding
Pulse Check (RI.7.9 ) |
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Which statement best explains how the two survivor sources compared in Part A shape the reader’s understanding of photographs from Manzanar?
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Have students write a short response to the prompt. Collect the response as formative data.
Say these Directions: Write two to three sentences in response to the following prompt
Identify one key difference or similarity between the sequences you read. Explain how this choice of structure, detail, or perspective shaped your understanding of the survivor’s experience.
Both the story about the Nakamura family (p. 90) and the quote from Taira Fukushima (p. 97) helped me recognize that we need to exercise critical thinking when looking at the Manzanar photos of Ansel Adams. The Nakamura family’s camp housing was not as nice as Adams made it out to be through careful choice of perspective, and Fukushima was certainly right that the smiling portrait photos did not tell the whole truth about campers’ feelings.
Seen and Unseen
Elizabeth Partridge & Lauren Tamaki
